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Hi, I'm a critic from :iconthecritiquables: Let me begin by saying that you do a very good job of painting the scene for the reader. The mood is conveyed very well. As I'm reading this, I almost feel transported to that place in time and feel the same joy that the protagonist is feeling. Although your descriptions are ...


Hi, I'm a critic from :iconthecritiquables: Let me just say, what a wonderful story explaining life and death! It's good that you mixed Greek mythology with Christianity, showing the evolution of human beliefs. Very well thought-out! I think the characters are very engaging. However, I wish you could've showed more cha...

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I think I’m beginning to understand
Your love for feet

When she gets nervous
She curls her toes
To make perfect little shells
Like snails

I begin to imagine them
With purple
And yellow stripes
With hazel
And magenta swirls

All the colours
Of daybreak
Evening light
And everything
Mystical

I begin to imagine them
Crawling in a rainstorm
Drinking up the dew

I begin to remember
You
Trying to convey
Just why you like feet

But I think
I’m beginning to understand
I'm Beginning to Understand
I know your love goes much deeper (and is much darker). But this is me trying :/ 

Just something that came up on Friday 
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Does anger come from entitlement?

Because after you left, I haven't gotten angry at you half as much as before. No, not even a quartre as much. I suppose because I haven't the right.

You did not leave me out of spite or chagrin. You were tired. And I cannot be upset if you merely left out of exhaustion. I cannot be upset at anyone.

At first, I felt like you had extinguished my flame. And I was angry. Which is funny, since being angry only proves how fiery I am. But then, I realized I was tending my own flame. Softly, giving light and warmth to my world.

How I hoped you would come by. So I could give you a little of that flame. But you did not.

Yet I know you are not ice. Because you did not wall yourself off. Our eyes met. And as always, you are impossible to read (Have I read anyone, really?). You said nothing. You reply to none of my messages. None of my calls.

And I wish I could be angry. Only so I know I could be reckless. Because you are mine.

But you're not.

Still my flame burns softly. And I wait. I'm not angry. Because I have no entitlements. Because you belong not to me.

But should I be lucky enough to cup you in my hands again. I will not grasp. I will not feel entitled. I will not become angry should you decide to climb out of my palm, to explore the world. Because you belong not to me, but to yourself and the world. Just as I belong not to you. I merely choose to continue stepping beside you, every morning. But one day should I decide to walk another path, that is only how it is.

I will not be angry. Because I have no entitlement.
Does Anger Come From Entitlement?
Bleh. Just something from the top of my head. 

All these years, I've never noticed what a hopeless romantic I am. (Is it your fault?) 
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Hello!

My friend just started a publishing firm, and he's looking for writers who are willing to contribute. It's a micropress, meaning your works will do very limited runs of handmade books. 

Here is the website: 

starvingmusicianpress.weebly.c…

Looking forward to your submissions! 
  • Mood: Welcoming
  • Listening to: Butterfly - Rajaton
  • Reading: Love and Misadventure - lang leav
  • Watching: Les Choristes
  • Playing: Fantasie - Gabriel Fauré
  • Eating: Apples
  • Drinking: Lemon water
Sometimes it's kind of a relief when a relationship ends. At least now I know it won't work. At least now I could move on.

Sometimes I wish you'd just die. So I could accept this is over, and move on. Sometimes I think even if you die, I'll probably keep on loving you anyway.
After It Ends
A little gruesome, this one. 

In response to Eva Khatchadorian's fear of feeling nothing after someone dies. I'm afraid I'll keep feeling. 
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Sometimes, I don’t know if I’m awake or asleep.

When we just wake up in the morning, when our mind is still filled with our dream, we think life is a dream. Nothing in life is real, because our dream is real.

Sometimes when I just fall asleep, I’m so convinced this dream is reality. But obviously, it isn’t. It’s a dream.

Sometimes I think I love you. I imagine loving you for a long time yet. I imagine I will wait, and one day you’ll return.

Then, there are times when I realize I cannot love you. We are so different! You left me! It’s over! And I think I don’t love you.

Sometimes, I don’t know if I’m awake or asleep.
Dreams and Reality
See, I'm doing it again. When I don't love you, I wish I did. Because... I want to? 

(When I start putting question marks at the ends of phrases, you know I'm losing it.)

(Is there a reality? I mean, it's all perception isn't it?)
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Hello!

My friend just started a publishing firm, and he's looking for writers who are willing to contribute. It's a micropress, meaning your works will do very limited runs of handmade books. 

Here is the website: 

starvingmusicianpress.weebly.c…

Looking forward to your submissions! 
  • Mood: Welcoming
  • Listening to: Butterfly - Rajaton
  • Reading: Love and Misadventure - lang leav
  • Watching: Les Choristes
  • Playing: Fantasie - Gabriel Fauré
  • Eating: Apples
  • Drinking: Lemon water

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Julia Li
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Canada
My life isn't nearly long enough to need a bio.

But if you must know, I write stories in the morning, sleeping is the best because God knows I have the weirdest dreams, and living would mean nothing to me were it not for music.

I hope that explains my life.
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:iconagent36496:
Agent36496 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014   Writer
Happy Thanksgiving ^_^ :hug:
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magic6jewls Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you, you too! 

How was your Thanksgiving? 
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:iconagent36496:
Agent36496 Featured By Owner 6 days ago   Writer
Pretty straight-forward. Family getting together. Had a turkey dinner. What's Thanksgiving without turkey? ^^
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magic6jewls Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Student Writer
Also left-overs xD 
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Dokhjor Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014
woah! Thank you for the watch!!:LaCanFLYYY: 
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magic6jewls Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Student Writer
No problem! Your drawings look really nice and I want to see more of them :D
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Dokhjor Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
Pikachu Yay Plz  ill do my best!
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Agent36496 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014   Writer
Happy Canada Day, friend ^^
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magic6jewls Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Student Writer
Ahhh! A couple days late, but you too! 
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Agent36496 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014   Writer
Happy Birthday, my dear friend :hug: :cake:
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